Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 21, 2021

ANOTHER ANTI-VACCER DIED TODAY ( senryu not haiku )



It started out as a flimsy idea. Write something; anything! Have I gotten lazy? Overwhelmed by the shit? I think I opt for the former and not the latter so much because words are still available; pandemic or not!

I love words. I love poetry. Maybe not mainstream writing like them who write (or writ) for the ages or weren’t specifically poets. Stephan Crane (In the Desert) comes readily to mind of course there are others. Bukowski, Brautigan, beat poets and their hedonism (baggabaggaboo).

Anyway about 7 hours ago I saw an article detailing how a mother of 4, decided to be virally anti-vaccination in the middle or a pandemic. She died this week.

Ergo I decided to make poetry regarding the situation. Specifically using Senryu form and not Haiku. The difference is the content and aim in haiku you are given words edging you to a specific season with an image drawn from it, in the third line.

Senryu is similar in that it uses the same 5-7-5 format but is not directed at the 4 seasons or anything specific beyond the poets intent..


There I stopped—the writing of a single Senryu, morphed into 6 pieces written to allow the reader to divine the intent. (I am not un-sympathetic towards her kids but still…)


ANOTHER ANTI-VACCER DIED TODAY                  
senryu not haiku

Jewels in the dirt

channel the rough times that kill

plant face, dig for them!

© M Durfee
9/21/2021



Jewels in the dirt,

channel the rough times that kill.

plant your body for them!

© M Durfee
9/21/2021


Jewels in the dirt,

channel the rough times that kill.

plant your thoughts for them!

© M Durfee
9/21/2021


Jewels in the dirt,

channel the rough times that kill.

Cry tears for their choice

© M Durfee

9/21/2021


Jewels in the dirt,

channel the rough times that kill.

plant body shallow

© M Durfee

9/21/2021

Jewels in the dirt,

channeling rough times that kill.

plant body shallow

© M Durfee

9/21/2021

 

Monday, March 30, 2015

EARTH TILT YOUR AXIS A BIT MORE EH?



SEND WARMTH
Lion feeds on lamb’s heart
Rips flesh and marrow from bone
Robins then appear

© M Durfee
                                                                    3.30.2015

It seems as if this unending winter (there were snow flurries yesterday) has reminded me of haiku. This one is purely of the Japanese form with the first two complete lines giving way to the third line,which details the season. Though a true haiku could contain anywhere from 11-19 syllables I chose to stay with the 5-7-5 construct. Send summer, my feet are going to be cold until at least the end of July.