WOODEN THINKING
There are yet to be found
uninfected trees in the wooden lands.
Few find them though,
most are too busy looking at the forest.
© M Durfee
9/16/13
SLEEP DREAM CLEAN
Lay me down to sleep,
to rest and wallow.
There is coolness
in the mud of dreams.
All can find the dreams
but few cannot get comfortably
night sweat dirty in them.
© M Durfee
9/19/13
RACIAL AWARENESS
People fear colors.
Leaves change their race willingly.
Change is beautiful.
.
© M Durfee
9/19.13
nice...like the play on the saying in the first...the last though is my fav...the leaves changing their race willingly...that is fresh....and subtly pointed...
ReplyDeleteBut do the leaves change their nature when they change their colors? Or are they masquerading now?
ReplyDeletePoetry for the people!
ReplyDeleteRight On Brother!!!
You're determined to turn my thinking on it's ear today. Congrats - you succeeded. :)
ReplyDeleteA nice set of triplets.
ReplyDeleteYes, change is necessary, yet so many struggle to grasp that. Loved this trio, Mark.
ReplyDelete'leaves change their race willingly'
ReplyDeletethat is one brilliant comment, mark.
these are a nice trio. tonight i'm going to fall asleep thinking of night sweat dirty. i'm receptive....
:^)
love
kj
Great food for thought ... willingly accepted by me(ouw) ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteI really like these, esp the first one. The gap between what is necessary and what is possible...
ReplyDeleteMark, Trifecta, Hat Trick! These three are sooo cool! xo
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